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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hey @yahavbenel! Thanks for sharing 'Neon' with us! ๐ฅ The lyrics are fire, nicely done! ๐ We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. ๐ถ This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! ๐ Good choice of beat! ๐ผ The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. Try adding, adjusting and removing effects to find what works best for the track. You defo have talent as an artist and we can hear that in this track! Your bars are dope and they are delivered with such swag and perfection. You have a great sense of timing. We think that you need to tone it down on the effects on this track as it's tarnishing the quality and potential of this track! There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. ๐ค It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
follow me Bars: On point ๐ฏ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐
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