my cemetery
dead shall rise againI am the highest of the hierarchy of the demons used to be an angel fell from heaven, in your dreams your foreseen the coming of a new age of love for your brother but yet im gonna stand here and watch you commit murder over a territory that ain't yours in the first place, ill be the rabbit in this turtle race, just follow the leader guns up up blaze em call em heaters, missile silos complete with heat seekers I get a headache trying to explain to yall yungins you want to rap about being hard how about let's take it back when you was spitting ubars on the corner of a church parking lot smiling at somebody's crying momma, that could be my mom's Ballin her eyes over me stiff and ashy laying in tge pine box but when you living how im living you really ain't giving a fuck.. deacons weakens reasons lesions heathens threesomes freedoms
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Hey @deadshallriseagain, We're gonna review your track 'my cemetery '. Let's get it! Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Vocals bit unclear on this one, try recording closer to your mic. You're slightly off on your timing. You gotta practice, listen back and practice again to get it right! The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. Maybe try our Masterclasses, to help fine tune your skills! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
I am the highest of the hierarchy of the demons used to be an angel fell from heaven, in your dreams your foreseen the coming of a new age of love for your brother but yet im gonna stand here and watch you commit murder over a territory that ain't yours in the first place, ill be the rabbit in this turtle race, just follow the leader guns up up blaze em call em heaters, missile silos complete with heat seekers I get a headache trying to explain to yall yungins you want to rap about being hard how about let's take it back when you was spitting ubars on the corner of a church parking lot smiling at somebody's crying momma, that could be my mom's Ballin her eyes over me stiff and ashy laying in tge pine box but when you living how im living you really ain't giving a fuck.. deacons weakens reasons lesions heathens threesomes freedoms
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