this my town
Ericklife ain't shit if you think long and hard, life will fuck you up so always stay on your guard. Keep in your mind that you can't show fear, Show them motherfuckers who's the boss around here. The world has gone mad since covid 19, Yet I still stay standing smoking greens and sipping lean. I stay fucking faded no matter what goes down, cuz shits gonna get real as I defend my town. I got my piece loaded I got many rounds, it's time to take em out pound for pound.
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Hey @erick.6903671, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'this my town'! 💥 Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
life ain't shit if you think long and hard, life will fuck you up so always stay on your guard. Keep in your mind that you can't show fear, Show them motherfuckers who's the boss around here. The world has gone mad since covid 19, Yet I still stay standing smoking greens and sipping lean. I stay fucking faded no matter what goes down, cuz shits gonna get real as I defend my town. I got my piece loaded I got many rounds, it's time to take em out pound for pound.
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