Out Of Time

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#whays #TDuB #TDuBTheWise #OnePunchPro Been driving all night, city lights are a sight for swolen eyes, Only thing on my mind, get to his side hold His hand before goodbye, I got the call 2am, woken by a buzzing phone in my ear, I immediately heard the pain in Her voice, she said will there’s been an accident, Jasons van flipped , hes in intensive care, oh no oh no oh no please not this again! Ok take a deep breath Ive got to load my truck and get to Michigan, my best friend and uncle is fighting for his life, I need to get there by his side, like he was mine,growing up he was my guide, he has to surviv, please Lord! I’ll never tell another lie! I help those in need and follow you to the light! And bring them with me, I’ll spread your word and pray for those who deny! I Cry Please don’t Let my Uncle Die! 14 hour drive is you in mind,memories of you spending your time on me when others doubted I’d be of value to society, you believed, you put trust in me, I can i see your eyes and I can see them gleam and hear your words on repeat, be your best, and choose greatness, your a beacon, the world needs to see. Time stops, I’m between a shuffle and a walk, I reach the lobby I’m met by auntie she calmly wraps her arms around me I feel the tears hit the back of my shoulder, I hold my uncles hand and and I told him, I love you unc your my best friend, I’d give my life for you to live, he squeezed my hand as the monitor went flatline, Only thing on my mind get to his side hold his hand before good bye

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Incoggnito

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5 years ago

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Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hey @tdubthewise, We're gonna review your track 'Out Of Time '. Let's get it! You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! Your voice sounds super clear, keep recording like that! 🤙 The track has meaning. 👍 Yess, liking your recording quality here, very clear. ✔ Vocals really clear on this bro! I think you should really duplicate the "No" that's really on key and replace it with some of the ones that aren't so much. Lot's of emotion in this one tho! Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! 🤟 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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