Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hi @charlesjoyner! Welcome to our feedback of 'my life'! 💥 Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 Good choice of beat here! 🎼 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Charles Joyner

2 years ago

just to let everybody know that's a freestyle I didn't write it then rehearse it nothing that's really my house going to the store which is about 4 minutes