Patrick Vannoy

entering the millennium

Patrick Vannoy
entering the millennium

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25 Feb 2022

i regret telling her that i tripped abd fell in he r kind of Eleanor Roosevelt said i looked to catch a predator si i said that shit is fucked uo so let ne tak to your editor but that bitch had a covered wagon dragging that shit like settler i was hoping youd open that guest list and start smoking but yiu treated ny dick like an open mic night abd started choking so i just peeled her back like we was artichoking bitch i was already broken lets get this party poken and yiu was hard ly smoking at this point we was hard ly spoken so i swimming and pimping like i had already rolled in but i just pawned was that the bike with the ignition switch the one i tried to have sex with but really just envisioned this life im living it hard to picture but really i just miss the shir

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3 years ago

Hi there @patrickvannoy.6776160, Here's some feedback on your track 'entering the millennium', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 Try improving your recording quality if you can. Try adding some of the in-app effect to your next track to take it to a whole new level. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

i regret telling her that i tripped abd fell in he r kind of Eleanor Roosevelt said i looked to catch a predator si i said that shit is fucked uo so let ne tak to your editor but that bitch had a covered wagon dragging that shit like settler i was hoping youd open that guest list and start smoking but yiu treated ny dick like an open mic night abd started choking so i just peeled her back like we was artichoking bitch i was already broken lets get this party poken and yiu was hard ly smoking at this point we was hard ly spoken so i swimming and pimping like i had already rolled in but i just pawned was that the bike with the ignition switch the one i tried to have sex with but really just envisioned this life im living it hard to picture but really i just miss the shir

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