first try

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23 Feb 2022

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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3 years ago

Yo @sexymomma, It's time for us to take a look at 'first try'! 💥 Make sure you put headphones in on your next track as the feedback is affecting the recording quality! Almost a perfect mix. Try increasing the vocal volume a lil' so we can hear you better over the beat. Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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