Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @hlophe.6883928, We're gonna review your track 'Mthinay.thenxe'. Let's get it! Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little! The beat here is overshadowing the whole track, turn it down a bit so we can hear your vocals! Work on improving how you deliver your bars and different flows to your tracks. You're slightly off beat. Practice rappin' and recordin' yourself back to tighten up the timing. Maybe give one of the Masterclasses a go, it's great way to help your timing on tracks. Thanks for submitting music for us to listen to, we can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Hlophe

3 years ago

track of time