Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hi @elijahrobinson.6882446! Welcome to our feedback of 'don't come back'! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 Your vocals are really buried in that mix, try turning them up next time! We like the rhyming, it's tight. ✨ Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 Why not try using some of our in-app effects, such as auto-tune or equalizer, to take your track to the next level? Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Elijah Robinson

2 years ago

you thought you was coming back a come back ill shoot you in your back im speaking facts if I catch you lacking im a have another body on my hands I ain't running a ban im just speaking to the fan boy you look like a can dont disrespect me or I will shoot you see boy if you got stung by a bee it will make you tea im never lacking im always humble unlike you you just rumble you look like a bum and boring and dumb you lame im gonna lite you up with a flaim no type of game im the same you gonna be tame I came to see what you gonna do your a fool im cool you built like a stool