living in the days
Living in the days old in a rage , living in the days looking at the lakes , Living in the days laid back eating a stake Looking back in the past Life on every side reading like it's a rap Face with the shape , Looking at the store Ai cameras be data saving your name you be like toaster with the tweet Hollywood is the same rams on the roster super bowl blast from the past , shady taking a knee honoring the rest , Dre with the bling sing his heart out the same 50 cent with bling bly with the swing Jamal with the lane , all of you can sing turn up for snoop in the same time for the sign , Rock rap hall of Fame you vested you blasted the beats turned up a notch , World's speakers a time machine in the sound warp speed ahead , insane in the brain , but may that music be tamed Laid back like the rest old times new times sound in the lain , let the microphone flow all.
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What's up @devinmarstonov, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'living in the days '! 💥 Your bars are good, keep it up! 🙌 Try improving your timing, you're not quite on beat here. You got some cool bars - these would hit even harder if you perfected your flows! 911...I'd like to report some fire. Great beat choice! 🧨 It would be great if you could improve the recording quality. Try filming in some other locations. Look at rap videos from your favourite artists for inspiration! The lighting here is super crisp, looks great! This could be a great track with just a few tweaks! 💯 Like Improving the audio quality, this would seriously level up this track!📈 Loved listening to this track, we hope our feedback is useful to you and we are looking forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: Great 🎉
Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
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