HIT THE DRUM 🥁

HIT THE DRUM 🥁

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#AngelSgp Hungry, throwing blows, who's not a victim, Angry with the ladder giving tydes to systems, Bleeding out, bank chase there's a million ways, Millions paths, promises there a proper way, Slave ship, Say shit, The outspoken crucify for being brave kid, Been had a target on my back, Just for being born in this world being black, Half Foreign what they called it, American Dreamers, They never could respect us as American Leaders, And so many try to knock us and while they ask us for features, Shit hit the drum on the slave ship, Ain't no love unless your ass looking in, Paper chasing, how you whipping Bounce words for a vibe, No cash even involved, it's still hate in your eyes,

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Please check out my music and let me know what you think about it Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

6 months ago

Hey @angelsgp, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'HIT THE DRUM 🥁'! 💥 We like the bars, well written! Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 Great beat choice, really works with the track! First of all your bars and the tone of your voice is so engaging and we really vibe with it. When your flow is on beat, you hit the beat so hard. You just need to try and maintain this throughout the whole track! Also if you could make your vocals a bit more crisp we know this would help this track reach the potential we know it has! With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

6 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

6 months ago

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