Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @deathworld, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for '4:00 a.m.'! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 We like the rhymes in here, good job.✨ We like the underlying theme behind the bars! Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time! Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! 👌 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Death world

2 years ago

4 am I text this hoe she's a fucking hoe I should just kill myself and put and into it fuck it I should grab the pills fucking end it I should grab the Glock and shoot my fucking brains out I've been texting this hoe and she doesn't respond I wake up drunk and unresponsive fuck it I should grab the Glock and shoot my fucking brains and hoes dumbassBitch you a hoe you're going to kill me I should find another woman to love I should find another woman to love to love I should find another woman to love this hoe is killing me I should just get rid of her that hoe it's just a cheater and she going to break up with me and then she will kill me