All on my own

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19 Feb 2022

the walls are breaking down on me. everything seemed to crumble before me the walls are breaking down on me. everything seems to crumble before me everybody seems to be tearing me to pieces or pull me apart from parts I don't even know if my heart is in the right place anymore even since the start I've been pulling myself together but nobody ever sees anything except black or white and everything seems to be a struggle for any other m*********** out there even though I pull myself together 10 toes down even though I try to even be getting left alone even though hibernating is not another mother f****** thing to do even though I'm living my own life my own dreams and my own reality even though everything comes crashing down on me I'm breaking walls and making calls m************ never make me want to say nothing when I speak up m************ never want to accept my opinions but I close the doors and shut them up because I don't want to sit at the tables and m************ of conversate or stick knives in my back cuz they ain't nothing because when I sit there and try to show up to show the f****** and shove stitches in the face just show them who the f****** with m************ never can catch me but when I talk I still sleep but m************ want to pop tricks m************ can never pop mother f****** real quick but when I'm in the m************ zone I'm breaking bones m************ never seen me with ait's slick ass mouthpiece for when I'm thinking twice m************ never seen it come first but when I'm back to the back m************ want to come with an educated attack quick with the tongue and slick with the mouth m************ never seen a South boy ride from the m************ when the mother f****** toys are out m************ ride with the cars like they got big whips but m************ see me in the project never dip it for what the backup with the shoulders down mother f****** know I'm ready to lock up show him what the real pieces about when I'm showing them what they are ain't nothing but b****** but I'm really wrong but I'm ready to roll so don't get me high strong cuz I'm highly educated highly designated m************ never see me cuz I'm designated to My own zone

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2 years ago

Hi @angelenofarrellsjr.! Welcome to our feedback of 'All on my own'! 💥 Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 The beat is a lil' too loud for your vocals, try putting it down to get the balance right. We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. 🙌 Your rhyming is tight. ✨ Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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