Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @lightning_bolt, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'accidents'! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 Think about where the words fall in line with the beat and experiment. This will improve your flow. Try listen back to your rap and see if you can get your bars to have better timing with the beat. We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! How about you try one of our Masterclasses? It's a handy tool to improve your sills by using our ready to go using. We really appreciate the time you put into your track. Can't wait to hear what you come up with next! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

lightning_bolt

3 years ago

turn it up hold on i got it off the street pulled out a gun 2 shot to his chest hes dead now shawty crying on the street blood on the floor he was rushed to the hospital girl cryin mad at me the cops are here arrested jail cell mama crying 1 year in jail still thinking if hes ok didn't mean no harm the cops are back pulled out a tazer why do you have a tazer he visited my jail cell he recovered i asked if i could get out oh shoot he didn't let me out a jail chained in shakles he said hustle boy come on now i learned my mistakes from shooting people he didn't want to bail me out he had the money for it