Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @sirmichaelocain, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'really tried'! 💥 Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. You're slightly off beat. Practice rappin' and recordin' yourself back to tighten up the timing. The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. Our Masterclasses are a great way to improve your rhythm and flow. Try it out! Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Sir michael Ocain

3 years ago

yea you did me wrong then it really made me strong i know you listen songs but i want to let you know i really tried hard uh when we pull we do no swaggin the popo at my door the better stop banging uh wait im so vervous what ima say to you am i going to make it truogh yea, i really dont know im just tryna get famous and do some shows and make it and then bring the bros you know, i dont mess with hoes my homies will kill you over 1 simple joke yea you know i dont play if i pull up with trea you know we do no talking just know we about to let it bang