Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @yiw5lvx0gf, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Stories'! 💥 Get your headphones plugged in if you want to see a big increase in the quality of your track. 🎧 Your vocals are just a bit quiet compared to the beat, try turning them up for a more balanced mix! You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 This beat is working well for you! 🎼 If you're lookin' for a bit of extra sizzle, try out some of our vocal FX. We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

John Phelps

3 years ago

You did what you did Now I’m lost Been locked in a box Far too long I need my head on right This shits all wrong I didn’t get life No long hauls I’ll see you one last time Once I get out Livin in sin With self doubt You’re with him Cause I let you down Lights are getting dim Like the holocaust I’m like a dime Bitch I’m bound to fall For now I’m doing fine Staring at the wall Girl you’re always on my mind But you’re waitin on him I’m thinkin bout crime Anticipation Of what’s to come Steady waitin Twiddle my thumbs Till the days end You’re a bum Think I’m playin I hope you cum Before I slay him When I show up I’m gunna nail him to the cross Upside down Blood drippin from his balls I hope he drowns As he hears your call Desperation As I reach yer halls And you’ll stay in You never knew the cost Of me waitin Timing the assault Bitch I’m satan I can hear your thoughts Steady pacing He ain’t gunna talk Now you’re anxious And you can hear me walk I’m shakin You could say I’m caught Mind racin This is all your fault Your days end Here and now you’re gone Bang bang and Then I see you Fall You’re fadin Now who’s LOST