Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hi there @zaccadams, Here's some feedback on your track 'hopeless dreamer', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 Feelin' the bars here, we like it! Tight rhymes, love the structure here. ✨ Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

🔥DonDaGod🔥

2 years ago

N I C E🕺

Zacc Adams

2 years ago

allright allright let's get to started you're like a hopeless dreamer staring in Divine light, you suffer from hindsight from this assigned fight, your bars are benign, while I recite malign shite, you're aligned to the sidelines, you're just a flea bite, I'm on my feet like a feline I'm rolling in the Twilight, I designed the timeline you can't get it timed right, infinite crimes I indict, hip hop in daylight, my lyrics are define and refine highlight the limelight, I'm the cashmere to your linen, much to your disdain, I jeer at your fear, I'm rulling your domain, the final frontier, the feigned membrane of societies b**** Mundane, monarch reign, revere the Shakespeare bloodstain, inane pain, lyrics restrained, appear to be insane, to the naked ear, profanity remains, for my melodies Pier, My Melody regains