Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Yo @datboiar! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'open your eyes '! 💥 Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 Loving the concept of this track, it has real purpose. 👍 Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. Try adding some of the in-app effect to your next track to take it to a whole new level. Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Glccc nine

2 years ago

Aye aye aye yea it's yo boy AR its crazy I got to wake up and hear that my grandma died how somebody so close to me gone die man I wanna scream I wanna cry but I can't because I got to be strong for my family she used to yell at me and fuss at me but I still loved her are love never gonna break its like pb and j yea I just wanna take you on a trip to LA you lived a long life but God said it's time to fly yeaaaa it's crazy I got to wake up and here my grandma died plss just open your eyes I just wanted to say I love you and goodbye before you died plss open your eyes your really pls let me see her face one more time you so pretty that's why you the queen of Cooley God took you away because he new you needed a break. I love you granny I miss you already I hope they are taking care of you in heaven yea this so crazy yea I wanna punch a hole in the wall I Miss Me and you watching wrestling and listening to our favorite song Man I'm mad I'm sad how can you take someone so close to me away from me but granny ima take care of the house for you and just know I'm always going to love you yea now she a angel but she was always my angel