#FALLIN

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13 Feb 2022

Falling out the sky I think my wings are clipped When that dude took my brother Man I almost tripped Court cases My mom and dad Didn’t want me to come To the courthouse Cause I would have flipped No role models no more Had to take a trip Dubai for a week Man everything was litt But I been through Hard times And easy ones Sometimes my mind got red Almost bust the gun Chics persistent But I don’t need one Black cloaks Demon watching me But I got saved by some nuns Holy water blessed up Serving god Is a lot of fun Homeless many times in my life The lord told me I had to run Get out that situation Negativity is a thief That steals happiness Now the negatives are done U are my preacher And u are my son Opened up the flood gates In my mind I was walking through The Red Sea A lot of people Had chains and handcuffs On my arms They didn’t want to see me free Free from the devils Free from the past Free from the horror They thought I wouldn’t last But I’m to strong Like Samson and Goliath Now the lord is Always on my side But the devils steady calling And my wings everyday Growing stronger I’m always uplifting 🙏🙏🙏 And from here on out I’m never falling

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3 years ago

Ok thank you mr AR I’m used to being in my real studio with my engineer mixing and mastering my music but wanted to try out this rap fame which is cool I’m off beat on purpose cause I rap like that sometimes which my fans love and I’m working on my 3rd album titled MY EXISTENCE CHAPTER 3 SOULFUL RIDE I’m a positive speaking artist but thank u for the insite 🦾🦾🦾

3 years ago

Hey @damienhaynes.6850093, We're gonna review your track '#FALLIN'. Let's get it! This track defo has meaning, what a great way to engage your listeners. 👍 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 Good choice of beat here! 🎼 The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Your next track could sound even better with some vocal FX. Why not try our set in the studio? This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

Falling out the sky I think my wings are clipped When that dude took my brother Man I almost tripped Court cases My mom and dad Didn’t want me to come To the courthouse Cause I would have flipped No role models no more Had to take a trip Dubai for a week Man everything was litt But I been through Hard times And easy ones Sometimes my mind got red Almost bust the gun Chics persistent But I don’t need one Black cloaks Demon watching me But I got saved by some nuns Holy water blessed up Serving god Is a lot of fun Homeless many times in my life The lord told me I had to run Get out that situation Negativity is a thief That steals happiness Now the negatives are done U are my preacher And u are my son Opened up the flood gates In my mind I was walking through The Red Sea A lot of people Had chains and handcuffs On my arms They didn’t want to see me free Free from the devils Free from the past Free from the horror They thought I wouldn’t last But I’m to strong Like Samson and Goliath Now the lord is Always on my side But the devils steady calling And my wings everyday Growing stronger I’m always uplifting 🙏🙏🙏 And from here on out I’m never falling

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