Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @jordancornelius! Welcome to our feedback of 'practice #1'! 💥 Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. 🎧 Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, bring it up a lil' to get the balance perfect. Think about where your rhymes fall to give a natural flow to the track. You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 Good choice of beat here! 🎼 Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jordan Cornelius

3 years ago

Rappers go through depression Tryna find yourself is so stressing They talk about you Cause they jealous Buckle up, social media reckless Don’t care about yo feelings They selfish, They’ll leave you hanging Like a necklace, Gotta swallow yo pride to express this, I'm the mailman I got to address this, It’s the only way you’ll grow Like steph curry you gotta let it go, Can’t hold it in cause it’s gone show You C4, in minutes you’ll blow Like some pumas, Put it all on the track Take the beat, eat it up like a snack Don’t let them derail you, Stay on track Spaulding yeah dog, You’ll bounce back