Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @ashmetcalfe, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'unconfined', here are our thoughts 💥 Make sure you put headphones in on your next track as the feedback is affecting the recording quality! Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 Good choice of beat here! 🎼 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin' All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Ash Metcalfe

3 years ago

What can I say im a little psychotic/ A little schizophrenic thats why i light chronic/ My red eyes slightly closed i might vomit/ Its bed time i suppose now write topics/ Fuck that i find the peace apply logic/ Rough tracks ride the beat provide knowledge/ Tough raps guide the streets confined by/ The beast that we fight despite the cunts lost it/ Once hostage love is quite toxic/ Touched by an angel fight to ride constant/ Constenets fill the page that I conquer/ Obvious still the flames that i conjure/ Nonsense i liberate your soul tonight/ Quick to flip and turn a pretty picture to a Poltergeist/ Spit it with precision im addicted like these waterpipes/ Bringin something different Unconfined MINDz slaughter rhymes/ Organised, like the covid outbreak/ I flow with proud hate and blow the soundscape/ Phobic down grade never i like over proof/ Shred ya like confetti never ready with the sober truth/ Its over due, like respect for collection/ Neglecting your soul for your own intervention/ Protected like gold in a safe for ya pension/ Its hectic the toll that we take for redemption/ I hate tension so i find a quick release/ Pickin up a stick of sticky icky that i hit to please/ Picture these set of lyrics on a cryptic beat/ Listen in to lyricism hit ya with a twisted peak/ My fine lines can shine like i hold mr sheen/ My minds fine alright its not crystal clean/ I'm still high from 09 i flow fine/ Show pride kill the beat as i slow time/ Oh my not another rapper go die/ Low tide quick with the boat to dispose hide/ Bodys that im stacking every object has an action/ The reaction is collateral control is outta fashion/ Our compassion is a never ending train track/ Stuck on a loop since the acid had ya brain tapped/ My main act is pain i state raps/ The days today taste ya fate my games axe/ Competition never understood me i just want ignition/ So i lit a flame and saw a way to claim some recognition/ steppin vivid fame was not the way that i invisioned living/ so i take the cradle to the grave and steady break tradition/ Tiptoe round the streets my mates creep/ Painting a piece and evading police/ Spit flows grounded peace we hate beef/ Tainted relief when our flames are released/ Trained to defeat any opposition/ With the proper rythym like a metrenome is tock n tickin stoppin villains/ proper driven like a formula one/ ignoring the sun night owl with his claws into bud/ Never awkward on a track like Forest Gump/ Marijuana farmer im the florist cunt/ Droppin honest funk for anyone who lends an ear/ Definition of metsphobics mission is we sending fear/ Represent the victims proposition that we render clear/ detriment is everywhere the system only sends a tear/ try to get ahead in life i guess ya gotta bend the rear/ over analyse my structure like a fuckin engineer/ Tracks are mathematical, facts are packed tactical/ Raps compact stacks react to acts practical/ Animal mammal in infact with fat appetite/ Cannabil fracture ya back attack have a bite/ I got my target locked in like a satellite/ Battle hype every day i wake n see the panic signs/ Anadyse set the flows in stone/ comatose ya foes Dont promote a known faggots lies/ I have to rise like im opposite of gravity/ Understated underestimated in my faculty/ Undertaking tasks that gonna probably make a casualty/ casually slay another bar for my havoc team/