malik

massacre

malik
massacre

7 Plays

10 Feb 2022

I like doing things my way, It’s hard to compromise, I tell them boys ketchup, Like French fries, Feel like Mr. West I gotta big ego, Cuz I make it look easy Free throw, I’m like hold up Let me humble myself, When I was a beginner, I wanted some help, Ok first of all You got to be yourself, Let the game choose you Play the hand you're dealt, Be confident not arrogant, That’s important, Mean what you say And your verses will be scorching, Last but not least You got to get your swag on, You’re unique it’s ok if you say the words wrong, It’s no proper way to speak It’s no English class, Make sure you clear enough And your message get passed, If you got all that Then you don’t need my help, Just hop on the beat And whip it like a belt. im from a street were a nigga get they face lift/

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3 years ago

Hey @malik.6837213, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'massacre'! 💥 Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 Good choice of beat here! 🎼 The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

I like doing things my way, It’s hard to compromise, I tell them boys ketchup, Like French fries, Feel like Mr. West I gotta big ego, Cuz I make it look easy Free throw, I’m like hold up Let me humble myself, When I was a beginner, I wanted some help, Ok first of all You got to be yourself, Let the game choose you Play the hand you're dealt, Be confident not arrogant, That’s important, Mean what you say And your verses will be scorching, Last but not least You got to get your swag on, You’re unique it’s ok if you say the words wrong, It’s no proper way to speak It’s no English class, Make sure you clear enough And your message get passed, If you got all that Then you don’t need my help, Just hop on the beat And whip it like a belt. im from a street were a nigga get they face lift/

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