Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @laurasaunders, We appreciate you sharing 'twat mobile' with us! 💥 Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 Turn your vocals way up, so we can hear your bars over the beat. Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. The effects don't really compliment this track, try to find the right ones for the mood. Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Laura Saunders

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.