we gonna ride
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β’08 Feb 2022
hoe you really in the way of a Big Mac, talking reckless inviting a pee to come and slap your s*** back.. the cash you better get that, or you going to have to get back, home of your own leaving messages on my phone bout how you love me and I'm wrong. might as well keep keeping on to the next intersection with thoughts of going back, and ain't no going back and you know that. I'm out of my mind lethal as fucc let me inject some pimp n your brain, I wasnt only chose by (the game) define it? to protect invest and maintain properly, income from a b**** that's not guaranteed but to make sure we succeed against All odds All eyes shall see when we conquer what's in your spirit little mama follow the music from whence its coming
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Hi @diavenshaw! Welcome to our feedback of 'we gonna ride'! π₯ Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, bring it up a lil' to get the balance perfect. Good bars here, defo works here! π Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat. Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! πΌ We like your use of effects they really suit your voice. However, your vocals are a tad low compared to the beat and your flow although you have elements of hitting the beat on point, you can fall off a few times in the track. Try work on this in your next submission! With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Dope π₯
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