Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hi there @lilrandycoveyii, Here's some feedback on your track 'Make It Happen (05:22)', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Try developing and mixing up your flows to keep listeners on their toes. There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 Good choice of beat! 🎼 Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

LilRandy Covey II

2 years ago

Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.