Demohds13
Demohds13

Demohds

Demohds

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06 Feb 2022

Check Back in the dex Smock till iam dead Drop the bomb right down you teck Check ceck check Free stiyell wot the hel Trap lick fuck Just duck you stupide ruck Check the hook Bass dont fuck get higj 5 Step to one side Cant die No life Lowe ride Just step

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2 years ago

Hi there @demohds13, Here's some feedback on your track 'Demohds', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

Check Back in the dex Smock till iam dead Drop the bomb right down you teck Check ceck check Free stiyell wot the hel Trap lick fuck Just duck you stupide ruck Check the hook Bass dont fuck get higj 5 Step to one side Cant die No life Lowe ride Just step

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