Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

What's up @shymyahmitchell, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'dozing off'! 💥 Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. ✨ We like the underlying theme behind the bars! Smooth delivery here, keep it up! 🎶 Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. We think this track could use a little extra spice. Try out our vocal FX rack to give your track a little something extra. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Shymyah Mitchell

3 years ago

sitting in that room i cant lie i feel like the walls are closing been struggling since i was a lil kid couldn't even buy my own clothing all this lean i been drinking nigga im dozing off i tell yo bitch to hop in nigga we pulling off