Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Wassup @aprilwilson.6815447, Thank you for sharing 'Elijah' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. 🎧 Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. ✔ Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! 🤟 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

April Wilson

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.