Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @montypwr! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'sheep'! 💥 Your bars need work, try write lyrics that are meaningful to you. Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 There are some nice effects in our mobile studio, like Autotune and Reverb. Why don't you try them? Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

montypwr

3 years ago

yeah i was on a sheep but he ceep tryng to leap he had a bit ofa sleep. yeah so i ditched the shep i was a bit of a bitch to the sheep but when i found out he did a massive shit on my foot my foot went up his ass he must of been eating to much grass after a few minutes he had a rash so i jumped and i thumped couse i was happy that he had a rash on his ass i have alot of cash yeah the sheep died couse he got spanked