Rogue Soul
Rogue One50 Plays
•03 Feb 2022
It's been three days, Don't know why I'm still awake, Stuck- mind descending into madness as my will caves, Pop the can let the bubbles spray, Brain broke- my head is ready to implode, My soul erodes froze colder than the poles glaciers, Majored- in the darkness I'm Darth Vader, Soaring half-dead upon my Death Star, Uncharted course, Unparalleled force, Unrelenting remorse, Unleash Hell when I step aboard, Feel my pain bursting in these veins, Sane but deranged, A pariah to the order, Beyond the border is where I chose my path, Rogue mask, Blacked up like a priests attire, Walked through the flames brimmed with stones, Not a light shined, Not a way shown, Not a song sung, I hear my Demons groan, On my own in the deadliest of gallows, Barred down in the bottomless pit, Can you hear my cries? Can you hear my pleas? Promises of pleasure now turned to horrors, Torrid the torture, Call upon Him, Oh' Heavenly Father, How I've fallen far, Drifting further from your grace, This curse I chase, Days are wasted away in bleak disarray, Hang my head to the floor ashamed- disgraced, Will this be forever my fate? Circling the drain as I try to change direction, Repeated lessons becoming my demise, Wading in the tide, Wash away these sins, Waiting for my time, How the fuck do I see with blinds eyes?
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Hey @rogueone.6812420, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'Rogue Soul'! 💥 Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. 🙌 The rhyming is well put together. ✨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍 Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
It's been three days, Don't know why I'm still awake, Stuck- mind descending into madness as my will caves, Pop the can let the bubbles spray, Brain broke- my head is ready to implode, My soul erodes froze colder than the poles glaciers, Majored- in the darkness I'm Darth Vader, Soaring half-dead upon my Death Star, Uncharted course, Unparalleled force, Unrelenting remorse, Unleash Hell when I step aboard, Feel my pain bursting in these veins, Sane but deranged, A pariah to the order, Beyond the border is where I chose my path, Rogue mask, Blacked up like a priests attire, Walked through the flames brimmed with stones, Not a light shined, Not a way shown, Not a song sung, I hear my Demons groan, On my own in the deadliest of gallows, Barred down in the bottomless pit, Can you hear my cries? Can you hear my pleas? Promises of pleasure now turned to horrors, Torrid the torture, Call upon Him, Oh' Heavenly Father, How I've fallen far, Drifting further from your grace, This curse I chase, Days are wasted away in bleak disarray, Hang my head to the floor ashamed- disgraced, Will this be forever my fate? Circling the drain as I try to change direction, Repeated lessons becoming my demise, Wading in the tide, Wash away these sins, Waiting for my time, How the fuck do I see with blinds eyes?
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