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Gritty Feel To It

Gritty Feel To It

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03 Feb 2022

in the beginnin/ niggaz winnin/ sue tiffin /breakin in denims/ drivin thru Virginia burnin down 95 grinnin/ lookin like grinch fat bag of loudmouths u know dem smokers they still vibin/ on with this world fuckin jokers steppin on toes /u get shot like clubs nowadays so I don't go/ me n my lonely friends is phony/ get money/ fall in love with it /pay a price to get it/ some failures to da wicked/ believe me u so sickness/ ill fainted by heart /nifty thrifty right out of fuckin shopping cart from Walmart /I lived thru when families tear apart /I lost my sister tore my heart/ u left early I can't understand that part/ fuck I gotta do with that part /why oh why don't start/ these bitches swaggin up da charts /I don't recognize who is who /slept thru da night no worries life nothing brand new/ get back to ya senses pussy ain't shit smellin like mildew/ experiences with quite few/ drunk porn hard/ have u disregard beatin pussies up like you in da yard/ tellin niggaz go hard go home/ we right at home/ lay my hat down who is these clowns/ I'm from a town/ expect the worst in dat field on any down /goin on fourth /they need a base hit to da first I use ta front court/ peace he was at war with them ockies/ they kept goin at his lesson 13 /he went out goon style shots from his semi/ got a bystander he up fed in da mountains doin 55 drizziees /big bro north philly/ Middletown handz b/ spinnin records it was in 93

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๐Ÿค˜ Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Impression: Great ๐ŸŽ‰

2 years ago

What's up @edgarjones.3764, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Gritty Feel To It'! ๐Ÿ’ฅ Try repositioning your mic to get them vocals sounding clean. Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. ๐ŸŽถ Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. The beat is fire, nice choice. ๐ŸŽผ We think this track could use a little extra spice. Try out our vocal FX rack to give your track a little something extra. Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! ๐ŸคŸ We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! ๐Ÿ’ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐Ÿ˜Ž

in the beginnin/ niggaz winnin/ sue tiffin /breakin in denims/ drivin thru Virginia burnin down 95 grinnin/ lookin like grinch fat bag of loudmouths u know dem smokers they still vibin/ on with this world fuckin jokers steppin on toes /u get shot like clubs nowadays so I don't go/ me n my lonely friends is phony/ get money/ fall in love with it /pay a price to get it/ some failures to da wicked/ believe me u so sickness/ ill fainted by heart /nifty thrifty right out of fuckin shopping cart from Walmart /I lived thru when families tear apart /I lost my sister tore my heart/ u left early I can't understand that part/ fuck I gotta do with that part /why oh why don't start/ these bitches swaggin up da charts /I don't recognize who is who /slept thru da night no worries life nothing brand new/ get back to ya senses pussy ain't shit smellin like mildew/ experiences with quite few/ drunk porn hard/ have u disregard beatin pussies up like you in da yard/ tellin niggaz go hard go home/ we right at home/ lay my hat down who is these clowns/ I'm from a town/ expect the worst in dat field on any down /goin on fourth /they need a base hit to da first I use ta front court/ peace he was at war with them ockies/ they kept goin at his lesson 13 /he went out goon style shots from his semi/ got a bystander he up fed in da mountains doin 55 drizziees /big bro north philly/ Middletown handz b/ spinnin records it was in 93

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