Ninja (23:37:49)
Oceany Chap31 Plays
•03 Feb 2022
Tryna change what I got but instead got fixated to a robot now what do I have nonetheless nothing but all my socialistic crimes never even mentioned a prayer so I’m just slaying around saying how you doin hallelujah I don’t understand how I could feel this wrong but I’m letting go and tempting myself until I feel approachable against every demand and all that suffering all that shits like a fuse I’m tormented by the game but it was an obstacle that I could never land so now I’m just shooting stars pouring out my veins to all that wonder along everything that I’ve said...!
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Tryna change what I got but instead got fixated to a robot now what do I have nonetheless nothing but all my socialistic crimes never even mentioned a prayer so I’m just slaying around saying how you doin hallelujah I don’t understand how I could feel this wrong but I’m letting go and tempting myself until I feel approachable against every demand and all that suffering all that shits like a fuse I’m tormented by the game but it was an obstacle that I could never land so now I’m just shooting stars pouring out my veins to all that wonder along everything that I’ve said...!
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