Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @treycephas! Thanks for sharing 'Red wine ' with us! 💥 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! 👌 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Trey Cephas

3 years ago

Red wine He to shy he don’t speak She across da room She too sexC She done 6roke da meeter I asked my father to get me wat I need She stay on my mind I think dat I need her Get da 6ag And keet it a secret Cuz wen I’m wealthy da ones who stayed down Are da ones thats gon still 6e with me And Wen I’m with you You make me feel like I don’t gotta leave Teeth gon 6e rose gold 6ut someone else stuCk on my mind poetry it’s not you Im tryna make it happen I gotta make my dreams Come true You won’t 6elieve dat things I 6een through I thank God Gotta give it my all From da 6eginning to da end I’m goin In 6y myself and dats how my story end I got my 6ig 6rother 6y my side So da story gettin rewritten My Father gave me another Chance Everyday I ask for forgiveness Da life we livin ain’t easy you gotta go hard from da start You really need too Tryna 6uild a mansion from da ground up Tryna live in a 6etter area Where there’s no roaches on da kitchen counter Idk don’t if her love as real I just like da way she made me feel I ain’t no love 6oy 6ut I love the way dis leaf makes me feel