J L

American Dream

J L
American Dream

74 Plays

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01 Feb 2022

Its an A- Merican Dream Land of the obscene and the principled and clean My neighbors say I'm so nice till they disagree with me I live in a house yet its empty on my street When the street is my heart And my body houses me I'm longing for retreat I'm longing for a peep from an old friend who simply wants to check upon me B. Why is everybody so damn distant in these streets? Look it's me. I can't help it I'm a freak My EQ is low yet my IQ it grows I'm a southern small black girl Don't fit to these norms I'm a bitch for some porn I'm a hit if I go and get discovered Save a penny for my mother even though she don't give a fuck Just have another daughter Where's the holy water They say I'm needing Jesus bitch I'll dress him up in Prada And his ever loving Father Yeah I got em I don't fit into a mold these typologies unfold I'm like pieces of a bone From the dinosaurs of old Evidence that one day imma go And Perish into stone They never gonna know Imma slip into the quietude of Everest and go Frozen in the cold Immortalized in snow Bitch you better know Gotta ride a high followed by the lows Flow with it grow with it You get one chance you better run with it I'm riding on a high having fun with it That's why fentanyl is wrecking all these young bitches Be swearing I am done with the one bitches Oneitis got me clutching on my heart Two way street traffic runway on the clock Like I'm fire off a glock motion propel in my palm There's the sight of dawn Beauty in the sauce Hit me up in paradise hoping I'm a star Paradoxical when I'm hiding on my lawn gotta put myself out there if I want a shot Look. Here's my addy Slide by my driveway and show me how to wrap it I'm coughing up a premium Keep your music blasting I don't need no problems I just need some common Sense And I just need some fucking sex I been like abstinent since The Nasdaq took an upturn Bitcoin took a downturn When the blockchain got cracked When Tom Brady got sacked Yo that ain't facts I give a little more so I can take a little back Don't got a heart of gold You can't make me feel bad Good times don't last But they make me feel glad They make me feel alive They make me feel like I Got purpose in this world I'm hurting in this world The American Dream with I'm flirting in this world Get on my knees and praying for this cheese yeah

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3 years ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

3 years ago

Hi @jl_UNvwhIqA! Welcome to our feedback of 'American Dream'! ๐Ÿ’ฅ Make sure you put headphones in on your next track as the feedback is affecting the recording quality! Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! ๐ŸŽถ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. ๐Ÿ™ This beat is working well for you! ๐ŸŽผ Your next track could sound even better with some vocal FX. Why not try our set in the studio? We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! ๐ŸคŸ We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! ๐Ÿ’ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐Ÿ˜Ž

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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