O.D.O. Wanny

10 months ago

Solid debut, looking forward to your journey! 🚀🎤 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @jonoh, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Smart (09:21:45)'! 💥 We can't hear you too well on this, try turning up your vocals a bit in the mix next time! Good bars here, defo works here! 🙌 Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! ✨ Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 Good choice of beat here! 🎼 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

jonoh

3 years ago

Cut with Commas