Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

What's up @sadpandaa83, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Why Can't We?'! 💥 Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! Think about where the words fall in line with the beat and experiment. This will improve your flow. This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Try not to overuse effects, it can be better to use less to give your track a more raw, personal feel. We think a great step to take would be to try one of our Masterclasses to help perfect your rapping skillset. Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! 👌 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

$ad Pandaa

2 years ago

Mmmmmm I just want to turn back look down and wish i wasn't wack, music got me ain't got no way home, my life is ruined and i cant turn it, follow me we can turn it, but as i move its the sorrow in the morning, the crying at night, the drizzle at light, cant pass a flight i ain't got no cash, bang back wished i was done, i cant see the dark my eyes are closed sharp, back when i was young it was fine, now its all messed up like a tree and a pine, new war, new me, fight back its the heart, backstabbing and switching, sorry i need some time, to see the world again. why cant you follow me? why won't you listen to me? wishing life was done, travel away cause ion wanna here the truth without the back that i need, fail down on to my knees, looking for a place to see the light, passing runors that i never need, in the end i won't let you down, i just need some time... so why can't we get along and sing a song about the feelings you can't see, needing my heart back i can't breathe. no i cant breathe. mmmmmmm