Listen (22:04)

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30 Jan 2022

its been a little while since i seen ya face septembers so cold that whole month i pace my anxiety is makin me lose all my sleep i wish u was still right here beside me my son i hold my breath and count to three but the fog is so thick i can barely see i swerve over toward the lake just to miss the tree now im a nervous wreck my mind is mocking me i feel like this life is nothin but another scene i wish i could say that it was all a dream but my dreams are all nightmares apparently, another day down i guess well have to see if i get to get to see your face when u got to sleep

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2 years ago

Wassup @countryboy.frezh, Thank you for sharing 'Listen (22:04)' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Make sure your mic is at a good distance while you record, your vocals are a bit unclear on this one. Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

its been a little while since i seen ya face septembers so cold that whole month i pace my anxiety is makin me lose all my sleep i wish u was still right here beside me my son i hold my breath and count to three but the fog is so thick i can barely see i swerve over toward the lake just to miss the tree now im a nervous wreck my mind is mocking me i feel like this life is nothin but another scene i wish i could say that it was all a dream but my dreams are all nightmares apparently, another day down i guess well have to see if i get to get to see your face when u got to sleep

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