emotions
Samuel tj Tembo45 Plays
•29 Jan 2022
we living life wit my niggas and we killing this look up and smile and laugh when we reminisce remember when you said we through i remember this look at the day and the numbers we were counting this bitxh... no money i dont need you fucking saying this shit when all the niggas walked to you i was feeling this shit, made some money overnight now am leaving you.... count all the days that you left me looking like a fool look what you did come and see what you made me do you sayed am ugly what tha fuck you wanted me to do am smoking weed and high but this shit aint cool and when am out take me down swimming in a pool.....TJ
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Hey @samueltjtembo.6692153, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'emotions'! 💥 Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! 🤟 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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