save my fam
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•29 Jan 2022
hot box chevys check my green im only 15 with dreams i aint toten no things no chops with beams no cup with lean but i smoke my green it doesnt rlly matter where i come from you see i had to walk with no shoes to get to where i am i have no money now, watch when i get it tam imma splurge on shit get it right and clap back fam imma do this for you ma and save my fam this is who i wanna be big white T cargo pants wearin b- woah (laugh) totn my heat (lighter) the sparker the thing this what makes wanna you fien
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Hey @yzhardelvalle, We're gonna review your track 'save my fam '. Let's get it! Lovin' the vocal level, it's the perfect volume over the beat so we can hear both. ✅ Your vocals are really clear, that's amazing! 🤙 We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. 🙌 Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 Try adding some of the in-app effect to your next track to take it to a whole new level. It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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