Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Wassup @josegarcia.220, Thank you for sharing 'Smoke (16:01:07)' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Try cleaning up the vocal recording quality by recording a little closer to the mic! Smooth delivery here, keep it up! 🎶 There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jose Garcia

3 years ago

pretty flaco jordy