Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @geooooooo, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Heart melter '! 💥 Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. Great beat choice, really works with the track! There are some nice effects in our mobile studio, like Autotune and Reverb. Why don't you try them? There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. 🤟 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

GeoOoOoOo

3 years ago

Yeah my heart is melting, yuh she is a motherfucking heart melter, running around with her fucking lighter, playing all these boys, I was one of these boys running around trying to get her love little did I know she’s a heart melter, then I got played got burned to the ground then stepped on, cause apparently that wasn’t enough as it was , now she is lost and can’t find herself, but now all of those boys are perfectly well because your life isn’t over when you can’t find love, but now she thinks her life is over and people hate her , it ain’t over pick yourself up you just gotta understand you gotta live with it “live with what” being a fucking heart melter, so how about you get rid of that lighter and focus on life, so your not know as the heart melter all of your life and let people know you wanna be something in life, cmon pick up the piece of all the broken hearts but the piece are so small you can’t pick them up, yeah, yeah my heart is melting, yuh she is a motherfucking heart melter running around with her fucking lighter, lighting all these hearts on fire it’s about to become a fucking fire hazard I can hear the sirens going off inside her head, she’s like hell in a bottle everyone said tho, hey fast forward she is happy got a family a kid and a boyfriend that loves her so much, but my heart is still melting because she was the fucking heart melter this time running around with a dagger slaying all these hearts because she finally found the one but little did she know her boyfriend was not as loyal as she thought, he even took the kid, she was left with nothing, she started to realize everyone can a be a heart melter so she became one again, forever ending loop running it back and back and back again, she’s loosing life again, loosing herself starting to remember that she was the motherfucker heart melter