Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @marvaturner.6745847, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Run Up'! 💥 You got great bars here. 🙌 Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. ✨ Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. 🌠 We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 Good recording quality here, well done. ✔ You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Marva Turner

3 years ago

run up ah bag in ah day just went got me ah check took the ice outta my heart nd went nd flooded my neck certified since ah youngin so when step cum correct I ain't worried bout nun nun of u niggas ah threat smoking on zah out the pack I got ah crucial connect one call nd he coming pulling up where you at did 10 just came home like fuck it I'm back moms said if I want it I gotta give it my best been that niggas for years stop acting like u dont know funny clown ass niggas take everything for ah joke till that heat as his door ion beef on the low if its problem address it up shit who want smoke its either kill or be killed in that jungle forreal ain't no love in them streets they play for keeps in the field pop them trans got ducking bucking all up in public fuck shit ion trust it I feel tension I up it chasing that bag I be running man I stay ona mission dont compare to niggas I cant relate to them niggas always smiling in my face but feel hate for ah nigga pussy just cause u strapped it won't make you no realer Murdaside we gorillas born and raised in the zoo if I ain't hustlin or working I'm spending time in the stu cold hearted cause the world is getten colder everyday cant wear my feelings on my sleeve or exposing what I make won't lettem play on my top bitch I'm always on game never switch on my brothers ain't no need to explain dumb shit keep it trucking banging no question 4 gang acknowledge all of my struggles I made away thru the the rain young savage that's me dont give ah fuck how u feel niggas know how I'm rocking nd if not what it is cop shit for ah profit tryna cum up on ah lick solo solo I'm riding cant get caught up in no shit