Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @elijahlavallias! Welcome to our feedback of 'Cool ice'! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. Try not to overuse effects, it can be better to use less to give your track a more raw, personal feel. We really appreciate the time you put into your track. Can't wait to hear what you come up with next! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Elijah Lavallias

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.