Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @jarvislewis, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Leader of the P (17:45)'! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 Your vocals are a lil' unclear, try playing around with your mic position to get the best take. You're not on beat with this one, try practising your timing so you can improve on your tracks. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. We think a great step to take would be to try one of our Masterclasses to help perfect your rapping skillset. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jarvis Lewis

3 years ago

The truth hurts, hard pill to swallow. Leader of the pack, I'll never follow. You can't see that, Where's ya head, Sleepy Hollow, Pen game sick, Spit gospel, write a novel. Fire in the booth, Make mics melt, Put ya soul on the track, They hate love ya self. It's all about expression, Grind study lessons, Hip Hop forever, You got any questions?