Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @theellisafornorpe, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'my fist rap'! 💥 Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 Your vocals are a lil' unclear, try playing around with your mic position to get the best take. You're slightly off on your timing. You gotta practice, listen back and practice again to get it right! The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

The'Ellis Afornorpe

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.