Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @parisonyeyiri, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'king fisher'! 💥 You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! Almost a perfect mix. Try increasing the vocal volume a lil' so we can hear you better over the beat. Your flow here needs improvement, try and work on this for your next track. We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! The effects have left the track sounding a little off, try playing around with them to strike the right balance. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Paris Onyeyiri

2 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.