Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

What's up @jay.6756250, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'first track'! 💥 Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. 🎧 Make sure your mic is at a good distance while you record, your vocals are a bit unclear on this one. You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 Try improving your recording quality if you can. You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! 🤟 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jay

3 years ago

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