Broken
Awikwok Awikwok72 Plays
•21 Jan 2022
family is happiness and a place to go home all that is only for the chosen one while I wasn't chosen two I can only cry every lonely night teach me how to be strong teach me to keep smiling and teach me to stay my person I can't bear to pretend anymore what should I do talk to the night window on in my room smoking to reduce the depressed I can only cry and crying kill yourself after understanding this world did i vent thank you for listening to me If you can't be happy, be happy even when you're depressed
Leave a comment
What's up @awikwok, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Broken'! 💥 Can't hear your vocals too well on this one, make sure you're the right distance from your mic. You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. 🙌 Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! 💪 It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
You may also like