Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @jarredbennett, We appreciate you sharing 'first freestyle' with us! 💥 Turning the vocal volume up a notch would really improve the mix. Tight rhymes, love the structure here. ✨ Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jarred Bennett

3 years ago

I'm 13 this is my first freestyle

Jarred Bennett

3 years ago

she wanted a sneaky link yeah im in first place might just do the race like im tay k pop her mans in the face got him tripping not talking hout shoelace he gonna need a neck brace then we snatch that gold chain yh you know boy in alot of pain.