Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @muhammadrezanaseri, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for '۲۳'! 💥 Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! 🎧 Turning the vocal volume up a notch would really improve the mix. Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 You might want to try one of our Masterclasses for your next track. They come with ready made lyrics and demos from some of the best rappers on the app. This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Muhammad Reza Naseri

2 years ago

😑I download the app Just to see what I could do with it, I upload a beat Now I really found some use with it, Explored through my thoughts Now my bars made a ruler fit, Brighter than ever What I saw like a solar eclipse, Listen to the flow Never thought that I had it, Practice makes perfect Came here like magic, Cleaner than ever So far from a static, This should get me forward Instead of being in a tragic.